Kindly provide your feedback on my entry work, thanks

Please check my design and give some feedback. if you don't like the design simply eliminate it, but don't rate it with 1, 2, 3 star. Thanks in advance. Have a nice day!

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Good day. Please check my logo. If there is any problems,please message my account and I will rework my logo. Thank you for your time.(#21727213)

Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks on #21715828 , #21715827 and #21715826 so that I can improve my design .Your feedback is extremely valuable for us to create some thing which you like the most. If you have something else in mind to help me then please write me so that I can come up with something which you like the most .