Hi there! I just submitted my entry today and carefully crafted my submission, Kindly check design (#22310725) and (#22310724), I look forward to see your feedback. Thanks!

Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

Best.

Hello...may I have your feedback? :)

feedback pls

Possible feedback on my entry would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks.