Please give me a feedback on my design #22383243. If you don't like it, please eliminate it, don't need to give poor ratings (Below 3star). Thanks in advance.

Hi there!
I would like you to send feedback in my art,
that I can submit the changes and I improve the logo to reach the goal.

Kind regards

NovoArtDesign

Hi there, please give a feedback for my submission (#22429633), thanks. :)

Hi there, please give a feedback for my submission (#22429633), thanks. :)