Possible feedback on my entry would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks. 

Hi there,

Please provide your feedback on my design concept.

Thanks & Kind Regards,
Design Nation.

Hi.
Please check my design .
Let me know if there are any improvements you want,
I am ready to fix it.

Hello sir, please give a response to the design that I have sent to you, sir # 22829709 and # 22829439

thank you, have a nice day

Revision sent please check thanks!