feedback please #22933589, #22933588, #22933586, #22933584, #22933648, #22933649

Possible feedback on my entry would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks. 

feedback please,....

hello sir,
please check and feedback please on my design, #22962327, #22962328, #22962329.

thanks and regards.

As a designer following your instructions, sometimes it is not easy to understand
exactly what it is you are looking for. Instead of a 1 star rating
(which damages our overall rankings)
we would prefer you just eliminate the design as opposed to a 1-star rating.
Or, give it no rating and supply feedback so we can re-design this for you.