Possible feedback on my entry would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks. 

hello sir,
please check and feedback please on my design, #23098779, #23098780, #23098781..

thanks and regards.

Hello,
Possible feedback on my design would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks.

Hi there,
I just submitted the design according to your brief. Design ID #23129465, #23129466, #23129467
If you like any design rate it between 3-5 stars. So that we contribute more submissions to contest.
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Please advise if I am on the right track.