Possible feedback on my entry would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks. 

Please Provide feedback on my design.

sir, please check my entry #23119976 #23119977

Thank you for the entries - the design needs to be less 'stiff' and more 'laid back' - many of these look like financial institutions; that is not what I am going for

sir 1 or 2 star rating lowers a designer's overall rating so kindly give a star rating of 3 or 4.At least look at the hardwork that a designer do on your project.so please you can simply remove this one star rating.regards.