What happens? https://jobs.designcrowd.com/job/3790353

After we looked at the options we received I was still not confident that I found the right design. It is a very good design as yours were bit not right so we decided to open it up again and tweak the brief.

Possible feedback on my entry would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks. 

Please review my design and kindly give me some feedback, as it will help me in improving my work.(#23171377)

Hope you like the designs! let me know if there is anything you don't like or want to replace that thing. Your feedback on my design would be much appreciated :)