Possible feedback on my entry would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks. 

Hope you like the designs! let me know if there is anything you don't like or want to replace that thing. Your feedback on my design would be much appreciated :)

Hello, could you rate my design? Thank you

Hello,
Thank you for inviting me to participate in your logo design BUT the TIME FRAME is just too tight.
Interesting task.

Hello!
kindly check my entry.
Please inform me about your feeling and Give me an idea about design.
I'm always ready to redesign until you have a favorite design.
Thanks.

Sir,

hope your valuable suggestions and rating on my desings.

Thank you