Thanks for the rate, any feedback on my design?? Thanks.

Hi Sangelo,
Appreciate the entry and I think i loved this the most of its artistic expression. The team hasn't picked a winner but none of my 2 partners picked yours as their top 3... I think they like it too but like me we are not sure it resonates with what we are trying to convey... when i have more feedback, i will share with you ok?

That's better, just send me a feedback or changes If you want too. Thanks