Hello,
I submitted a design to your logo contest and I would appreciate your feedback.
Hopefully you'll love it but in case you don't, please just eliminate it rather than give it lower than 3 stars.

Thank you!
James

Hi,
Please have a look at my design #23429572
Looking forward to your feedback.
Thank you :)

please give feedback.

thank you

Hi there,
need any feedback to improve my logo, ok?
any changes just tell me.
best regards