Please feedback..

hello sir,
please check and feedback please on my design, #23580398, #23580399, #23580400.
Rating Guide: If you like any design rate it between 3-5 stars, otherwise just 'eliminate' it. Rating 1-2 stars severely impact the designer profile and hence limits to contribute more submissions to contest. Thanks for understanding.
thanks and regards.

Sorry I didn't read this message before I looked at the designs. I have removed the one star/2stars.

Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief. Please review my design and let me know if I am on the right track and no low star ratings 5-star rating will be appreciated for my efforts, please.