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(#23686292) feedback please

Hello there,
I submitted my design thought according to your brief. Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track. If you don't like my design, please eliminate those rather than giving 1 or 2 star rating.
Design number #23670590.
Best regards.

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I have submitted a design. Please give your feedback for the design because it will help my future work. Thanks!