Hi, Please check my submission and let me know for any change, also provide me feedback Thanks

hello sir,
please check and feedback please on my design, #24326647, #24326648, #24326649..
Rating Guide: If you like any design rate it between 3-5 stars, otherwise just 'eliminate' it. Rating 1-2 stars severely impact the designer profile and hence limits to contribute more submissions to contest. Thanks for understanding.
thanks and regards.