Please provide feedback on my design

Hello there,
I would appreciate any feedback on my entry (#24512805)
Thank you in advance.

Hello Project Owner,
Please give me a feedback on my design #24515820, #24515708 & #24515697 , it would be much appreciate for my future work.
Thank's :)

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