Hello sir, please feedback on my design #24989004, thanks

Hello Owner,
Would you give me some valuable feedback on my design here: #25021968??
So I know my design quality is close to what you are looking for from this contest.
Thanks in advance :)

Warm Regards,
Fatboy29*Design

Hi,
I am glad to participate in your project.
A proper feedback in this kind of work is curcial, so if it is possible I count on yours for the following submissions;

#25033566 #25033910

If you don´t like any of those approaches just comment and eliminate, because low rating is not fair for our kind of work and downs our global rating. Thanks!

Best regards,