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feedback please on design 25343969 and 25343970 . thanks

Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief. Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

If you don't like my design, please eliminate those rather than giving low star rating. (#25348042)(#25348046), thank you

Please check my design (#25382718), feedback please i will wait for your feedback Thank you