Hi! I submitted two entries, please review design (#25410464) and (#25410463) and hope to hear your feedback. Thank you!

I have submitted a design. Please give your feedback for the design because it will help my future work. Thanks!

I like your design the most and I will need to get feedback from the web developer on the revisions for the site.

1) I would make the "Chicks" with darker or a bit thicker as it’s hard to read at a distance or on a light background.

2) The negative space in the logo seems a bit off, I am really visually drawn to the negative space but it doesn't seem to have much purpose (other than creating the LA effect). Maybe experiment with having the left side of the A filled. Gets lost in the smaller colored version of the logo as well.

Example: https://dw3i9sxi97owk.cloudfront.net/uploads/stream/2020/09/1404429/17164439/Screenshot_2020-09-17_124422.png
Experiment with variations where you add a small bit of the vertical for the A.

Design #25415574 (the 2nd version at the bottom) is approved for the “CHICKS” font thickness.

Design #25416106 is approved for “LA Travel”
Just make sure the inner A line has sharp line, because it looks rounded inside.

Please kindly submit the finished files in Jpeg and in PNG with a transparent background.

Artwork colors are as follows:
- All words in black
- All words in white
- All words in blue
- L & Travel in Black / A & Chicks in Grey
- L & Travel in Black / A & Chicks in White
- L & Travel in White / A & Chicks in Blue
- L & Travel in Blue / A & Chicks in White

Please match the blue from our original logo: https://www.dropbox.com/s/9dnwn8r98x08akq/LA%201%20%28PNG%29%20Blue%20-%20UPDATED.png?dl=0

Hello. I sent revisions request yesterday and you’ve gone silent.
When can we finish project?