Please feel free to give feedback on my designs. Thank you

Hello,
I have submit my new design. Please check the design #25813383.
Thank you.
Ri.

Dear project owner, please check number #25824396, if you don't like it, don't give low star, just eliminate it, because low star makes a bad designer profile.
I hope to get feedback from you, and if there are some revisions I would do it quickly.
thank you.