please give feedback.

Thanks

Dear Project Owner,

I have submitted my designs.
I know you are busy but, would you mind to give me your feedback?
Please tell me if I am on the right track.

Best regards!
Coco

HI, thank you for your design. Unfortunately the design is little bit too young/funky for me. I was looking for something more traditional.

feedback please!

I have submitted a design. Please give your feedback for the design because it will help my future work. Thanks!