Hello project owner,

please check my animation.
For now, it is just a GIF preview.

Kind regards

Miladin

Hi Miladin,

I like your design, I can see you have put a lot of effort.

I Have Some Feedback for You
1. The general pace of the animation can be slightly faster.
2. The beginning can be more detailed, start from the inside of the galaxy (we see stars, Interstellar medium etc), zoom out and we now see the shape of the galaxy, continue to zoom out we can know the whole galaxy is actually inside of the head.
3. I really like the black and white inverted effect at the end, I think you can try some other effects that are faster, so the inverted effect looks stronger.
4. I think the ending can have a smooth transition that make it back to nothing(Pure Black or White) again.

Also, would you be able to talk a little bit about the creative direction of your animation?

Looking forward to see your design again.
Many Thanks

Hi and thank you.

Glad you like the animation.
I will adjust it according to your feedback.

You can send me a private feedback message so that we can continue discussing privately.
I will be back with a new upload very soon.

Kind regards

Hi guys from Moti,

the revised design is uploaded.
There are two variations of a different ending.
I am sorry if I kept you waiting but this kind of animation is immensely time-consuming.

Kind regards

Hello,

I see you extended the contest but did not provide me with feedback.
I would appreciate it if you let me know if I am still relevant to this project.

Thank you.

Hi Miladin,

I Really like the 2nd Version of the animation, and I think its very close to finish.

Here's is some feedback for you:
1. I think the intro can start after the white flash, makes the pace of the intro more tight
2. The Galaxy part After the white flash, I still think it needs to be more delicate and detailed
3. I really like the black and white negative space ending (The Head), but I think when the head moves to the left at the end, it can have a eraser effect to turn the whole screen to black instead of fading out the logo.

Many Thanks
Moti Media

Hi Again,

Just wanna know would It be possible for me to have your contact detail, so we can continue to discuss it privately and I can also provide you feedback quicker. And i really appreciate the effort you have put in and the animation that you made, I hope we can continue to collaborate if I have some other projects.

Many Thanks and best regards
Moti Media

Many Thanks
Moti Media

Thank you for replying,
I thought you were done with me :D.

You can send me private mail when you rate my project with stars.
I would love to share contact but I am not allowed to type contact details or share any links, I could get banned from this platform.
BUT if it is not too much trouble for you you can google my name ( Miladin Drazic).
You can find details on my Behance or LinkedIn profile.

I will adjust the design according to your feedback asap.

Thank you
Miladin

Hello,

did you succeed in finding me :)?

I uploaded a new design, the ending is the way you wanted now.
I am not sure if you are happy with the galaxy part, but I made it more detailed and alive.
I hope I understood you well, I dumbed everything before "white flash" and made it more detailed.

Kind regards

There is two design actually one is slightly faster at the start.