Sir,
Please give your valuable suggestions on my entry (#26413989) and ask for further revision.

Thanks and regards

Hii Sir,

it would be great if you check and give your valuable feedback and rating on my submissions.

Thanks & Regards

Hello,
Possible feedback on my design would be muchly appreciated.
Thank you.

Would love to see if you can provide me a version that has the text slightly closer together in the same font, and perhaps a version in futura font?

Hello, please check the design.