Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated.
thanks.

please sir check my design #26427892,,,

Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

If you don't like my design, please eliminate those rather than giving low star rating.

Best.

The H for Hirst is in the logo so I don't want the big H and then Hirst written out. It makes the H redundant

Please check my submission and let me know for any changes or modification... Thank you