feedback please..thanks

hey there, what do you mean?

please check my new design

Hi Ma'am/Sir,

Please kindly provide feedback on my design. Thank you.

Regards.

BatGD

As a designer following your instructions, sometimes it is not easy to understand
exactly what it is you are looking for, please eliminate it but please don't rate it 1/2 star
(which damages our overall rankings)
we would prefer you just eliminate the design as opposed to a 1/2 -star rating.
Or, give it no rating and supply feedback so we can re-design this for you.
please remove 1/2 star ratting.. I hope you understand