hello sir,
please check my design, #26729474, #26729475.
thanks.

Hello Project Owner. I have submitted a design in your contest. I would appreciate if you provide me your feedback. I will do all the changes till you're satisfied. Thanks

Hi Project Owner
I have submitted the design, I hope you can take the time to check if it is what you want. Or should you still need a change?Also check the font that I use is appropriate.
Thanks

please check my new design