Feedback please.

feedback plz, need to know whether am going in correct path or not?

After all of you worked so hard on my design, it made me finally realize what i do and don't want. I have just updated my design request. I know you are very talented and come up with some great ideas. i can't wait to see them. Get to work!! Thanks so much for allowing me to change my design in the middle of the process. i really had no idea what i wanted when i started this process.

feedback please!

feedback pls