Please sir check my design.. feedback please I will wait for your feedback Thank you

Feedback please.

Dear Project Owner,

Please feedback and tell me if I am on the right track.

Best regards!
Filip

Hi
Any update please

Dear Project Owner,

Please guarantee the contest and you will get a lot more interest,
even with the minimum prize.

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Best regards,
Filip

hello... I've updated my design. I hope you review my design revision, thank you.