hello sir please check my submission #27417739 and feedback please thank you

please check my design #27417868,,

Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated. thanks

Hi project owner, i just submitted my design (#27424313). Believe me you are going to like it.
And please provide feedback for better interaction. Thanks
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