Possible feedback on my entry would be much-appreciated Thanks

Hi,
Have submitted a concept design for your logo. Waiting for your feedback to move further with the design. Thanks

Faizal
#27502278

Dear sir,
possible feedback on my design #27527277 would be much-appreciated .
Regards.

Dear Contest Holder, if there’s anything else I can do with any of my entries just let me know. All the best to your contest and always at your service, artespraticas