Feedback, please!

Hi, I've submitted my design (#27533464) and I'm looking forward for your feedback. Please feel free to suggest any changes or adjustments. Thanks.

Note:
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otherwise just 'eliminate' it or leave no rating.
Rating 1-2 stars severely impacts the designer's profile and
hence limits to contribute more submissions to contest.
Thanks for understanding.