I have submitted a design. Please give your feedback for the design because it will help my future work. Thanks!

Hi! Thank you for the invite, to work on your project! I just finished and submitted two different versions for the logo after reading carefully the brief. Any feedback, is much appreciated. What do you think? Best, Obi.

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Feedback please! (#27722020)

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Hey,
Kindly have a look at this design #27898761 & #27898765. I came up with this after going through the sketch provided.
Looking forward to your feedback.
Regards,
Muhammad Usman

please check my submissions....for any changes or modifications just let me know...Thank you..