Feedback please.

I have submitted a design. Please give your feedback for the design because it will help my future work. Thanks!

hi project owner
possible feedback on submission #27668611.
Warm Regards

Dear Contest Holder, if there’s anything else I can do with any of my entries just let me know. All the best to your contest and always at your service, artespraticas

Hello dear Contest Holder. Just to wish you the best of luck to your contest and let you know that I'm at your service for any input as so far. Kindest regards, artespraticas

What was my fault? My Design- Contest (#27650461,#27650460) winning design and my design same same.