Hi, I submitted an entry; please review the design (#27698892), and please provide direct feedback on my entry. I hope to hear you soon. Thank you!

Hi, I added some revisions; please review the design (#27716418), and let me know if you still need changes, thank you, and I hope to hear you again.

Please check my design #27728317
If you like it, you can give it a star.
If you need improvement, you can provide feedback.
and if you don't like it, you can eliminate it.