please check my design (#27839723),, feedback please

Looking forward to your valuable feedback, Thank you!

Hello,
would be great to know your feedback on my design #27850982 just to check if I'm on the right track.
If you don't like entries please just eliminate them outright or leave unrated (low rating 1-4 stars damages designers overall rating).
Thanks for understanding and good luck with the project.

1-3 Star disappoints designers. Destroys interest in participating in new work.
Most clients do not try to understand this. A designer spends time and talent participating
in a design competition. If you don't like the design, reject it. But don't give 1-3 stars. This makes us very upset.

Thank you for letting us know, we had no idea ratings did that!

Thanks for letting us know.