feedback please on design #27955694 and #27955695 , thanks

Hello Sir, please feedback #27959482

Hello Sir , please feedback #27968537

Thanks for the message. I'm not sure that I like the weapons obscuring the name as it makes the name a bit hard to read. Maybe a rearrangement or alternative cleaver integration might improve the design.

please feedback me on my design personally , that would help to give you perfect revision and its public place here . regards

please check my new submission design #27973717 and feedback me on that , regards