PLEASE PROVIDE FEEDBACK ON SUBMISSION #28023960 AND #28023988

Dear sir/ma'am, Am I in the right direction? Please check my submission and provide your valuable feedback for my design #28108995 . Hope you gonna love this. Feel free to ask for any kind of change or modifications... And please don't give 1 star or 2 star rating, it's DAMAGE designer's ranking.... :( :(
regards... :) (stay safe stay home)

Dear sir,
possible feedback on my design #28127329 would be much-appreciated .
Regards.