Hi! Pleade provide a feedback on my design
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Dear sir,
possible feedback on my design #28069592 would be much-appreciated .
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Hello, Please kindly check my submitted design. I would really appreciate if you could provide feedback DesId #28071307 . Thank you.

Yes, that is even better.

This is an improvement, thank you.

Hello Sir, Thank you for your response. I submitted another design using the same theme. Please kindly check DesId #28074269 and provide feedback. Thank you .