Hi, could you please supply me some creative feedback to see if I am on the right track? Thank you.

Dennis, it will be a bit before we have feedback. Once the project closes, I'll meet with the clients to review all the designs and narrow down based on the direction they like. Thank you.

Dear sir,
possible feedback on my design #28160885 would be much-appreciated .
Regards.

it will be a bit beforeOnce the project closes, I'll meet with the clients to review all the designs and narrow down based on the direction they like. Our review meeting is currently set for next week Wednesday. Thank you.