feedback please on design #28148091 and #28148092 , thanks

Feedback. #28152114

Would like to get your views on my concepts.

Hi Project Owner,
I've submitted some design proposals for your logo design according to your brief. Please provide your feedback if I'm on the right track or if further adjustments are required.
Cheers and thanks,
Slant Line Media

Dear Sir,
Kindly provide your valuable feedback on my Designs #28186709 & #28185900 to know if i am in the right direction. please
Waiting!!!
Best Regards