hi please check my design (#28277555)

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Kindly provide me with your valuable feedback for Design #28300378 , #28300395 to know if i am in the right direction. please
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Hi, can i get some feedback on my designs. Thanks you!

Hello, Please kindly check my submission #28311716 . I would really appreciate if you could provide feedback on the design. Thank you.