Sir, please check my design #28302916 and feedback, please. Thank you.

Hi Respected Sir.
Please review the designs #28370643, #28370640 and let me know how are they.
I hope you'll love they.
And please don't hesitate to ask if you need any changes.
I'll be waiting for your valuable feedback.
Thank you :)
(In case you don't like any of these, Just let me know I'll go with a different approach)

Guten Tag! Ich habe Deine Designvorschläge gesehen und bewertet, vielen Dank dafür! Bitte schaue ob Du die Änderungen vornehmen kannst wie von mir geschrieben. Beste Grüße, Tino

DO HAVE A LOOK AT #28388092

please tell me what do you think about my new idea #28415114 i can revise anything