hello sir,
please check my design, #28367604, #28367605, #28367606.
thanks and regards.

Dear Honorable Sir,

Have a great day.

possible feedback on my design #28369118 would be much-appreciated .

I hope you'll love my concept.

Please don't be hesitate to ask for revision if you need any changes.
Looking forward to your valuable feedback.

Regards.

(In case if you don't like my concept, Just let me know I'll go with a different approach)