hello sir,
please check my design, #28411143, #28411144, #2841114345.
thanks and regards.

Sir, please check my design #28411270 and feedback, please. Thank you.

Hello,
Please review my design and let me know your thoughts.

Best.

Looking forward to your valuable feedback, Thank you! (#28415029) (#28415030)

Dear Honorable Sir,

Have a great day.

possible feedback on my design #28426095 would be much-appreciated .

I hope you'll love my concept.

Please don't be hesitate to ask for revision if you need any changes.
Looking forward to your valuable feedback.

Regards.

(In case if you don't like my concept, Just let me know I'll go with a different approach)

doesnt look like golden retriever at all