Hi there
Can you check my design and let me know for any change
Regards.

hi project owner, I have made a logo according to the brief you provided, please check it and give a feedback.
regards.

Dear Honorable Sir,

Have a great day.

possible feedback on my design #28441079 would be much-appreciated .

I hope you'll love my concept.

Please don't be hesitate to ask for revision if you need any changes.

Regards.

(In case if you don't like my concept, Just let me know I'll go with a different approach)