Kindly give feedback on my designs please.

regards
comlogo

Dear Honorable Sir,

Have a great day.

possible feedback on my design #28539487 would be much-appreciated .

I hope you'll love my concept.

Please don't be hesitate to ask for revision if you need any changes.

Regards.

(In case if you don't like my concept, Just let me know I'll go with a different approach)