feedback please on design #28571441 and #28571442 , regards

Sir please check my design #28572270 and feedback please. Thank you.

Dear Honorable Sir,

Have a great day.

possible feedback on my design #28605262 would be much-appreciated .

I hope you'll love my concept.

Please don't be hesitate to ask for revision if you need any changes.

Regards.

(In case if you don't like my concept, Just let me know I'll go with a different approach)