feedback please on design #28592218 and #28592219 , regards

Hello,
would be great to know your feedback on my design #28599668 just to check if I'm on the right track.
If you don't like entries please just eliminate them outright or leave unrated (low rating 1-3 stars damages designers overall rating).
Thanks for understanding and good luck with the project.

Hello,
would be great to know your feedback on my designs (#28598484) - (#28598447) - (#28598403) - (#28598362) - (#28593318) - (#28593276)
, all my work is original from my sketches .

Dear Honorable Sir,

Have a great day.

possible feedback on my design #28603889 would be much-appreciated .

I hope you'll love my concept.

Please don't be hesitate to ask for revision if you need any changes.

Regards.

(In case if you don't like my concept, Just let me know I'll go with a different approach)

please check my new design

Client picked the same design but could care less to give feedback to me but picked the same one..great and dc should introduce negative client feedback too.