please check my submission #28648534 and feedback please thank you..

Hello,
I have submitted a new design.
Please check the design id #28651516.
And provide me with some feedback Pls!
Thank you.

Please provide feedback on my design..

Hi,
Sorry the design is not to your liking.
Could you please remove the 1 star and eliminate the design instead, as a poor rating affects a designer’s ability to design for other clients,
or re-rate it 3 stars, which is just an average rating. Designers are more inclined to participate in clients projects if their designs are eliminated or given 3 stars.
Thank you for understanding in this matter.
I wish you the best of luck with your project.
Have a nice day, and many thanks.
Regards,
Vincent