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Sir please check my design #28661177 and feedback please. Thank you.

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please check my design, #28663248, #28663250.
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please check my design #28665889 and #28665890,
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Hi!! I just finished and uploaded the logo for "Salt in my Soul". What do you think? Best, Addi.

please check my new concept design #28750052 and #28750053 , regards