Hello sir , Please check my design #28732433 and feedback , ty!

Please check my submission #28732889 and feedback. Thank you :)

Please provide feedback on my design..

Please provide feedback, thanks.

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This blog had several that I liked 7, 8, 14 and 16 specifically.

And sorry I should have mentioned. Please move the strength to the right. Thanks for your speedy response / edits and patience

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